lol mang don't be so harsh. its her first try =)
Shanash try to be more indepth don't just write what happens and the plot. tell us why we would like the anime. the genre ad everything. the reasons you liked it and give your personal opinion about everything, also make the review clear and not all bunched together makes it very confusing. that should be able to get you started =)
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