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Old 06-06-2008, 03:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Pros
- Good Centralisation of the render.
- Good use of Shadow
- Background aint half Bad

Cons (Constructive Criticism )
- Text blends into too much, making it hard to read, try changing the Colour, i suggest a darker colour e.g Black
- Pretty low quality render, plus theres alot effects over it, doesnt help much. I suggest, removing all the effects to it, and simply blend it.
- Some Brushes might help, it'll liven the sig up or add some C4d's and play with the texture of the sig.

Im guessing your a beginner, so nice try
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