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**Ya-chan** · 06-06-2008, 08:17 PM

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It's not looking that bad, you have improved indeed, but, yes, it is to bright. The text isin't really readable :| Also imo there isin't very much focus on the person but on his leg xD Hehe. But well. You say you hope you've improved. Well it takes more than 3 days or so to become an artisan GFX Maker

Hehe

06-06-2008, 08:17 PM	#5 (permalink)
Ya-chan Prince of Yaoi Ya-chan is offline Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Faroe Islands Posts: 1,164 Rep Power: 8	?? The Icebreaker Starstreaker It's not looking that bad, you have improved indeed, but, yes, it is to bright. The text isin't really readable :\| Also imo there isin't very much focus on the person but on his leg xD Hehe. But well. You say you hope you've improved. Well it takes more than 3 days or so to become an artisan GFX Maker Hehe __________________ My Blog! =D Currently watching: Naruto Shippuuden Junjou Romantica 2 Bleach Latest Render (New Years Update! Updated 1/1) Spoiler http://i342.photobucket.com/albums/o..._chan/Link.png