jakku u a bad man lol
but yea a very nice story. but the bit were ya lost me at was the report thing on tv. if it was me writting i would have put something like.
he sat at his bed thinking over and over why didnt i tell her sooner. then thinks what the hell am i just staying here for you hear about people get hurt and other thing by people on the internet. i should be there for her to make sure nothing happens to her after all if all i can be is her best friend so be it. then start looking... (story continues as normal) that would have made it sound really believable i think anyone else agree?