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04-02-2008, 10:24 PM
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Sig Criticism - first sig
Ok, so i finally did my first sig, and I wanted to share it with you guys.
Its no soph, but its my first, so any criticism would be nice.
Here is a quick revision, changing the text and adding a black border
And here is what the final version of it looks like, I changed the text size and changed/added a few shades to blend it well with the C4D and render
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04-02-2008, 10:43 PM
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Not bad, but you're not ready yet for pictures like this:
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04-02-2008, 10:46 PM
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hahah Valk
Very good for first start, and I use that c4d render quite alot 
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04-03-2008, 01:54 AM
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Uhhhh =D Not bad. lulz ^^ Maybe add a border but else i kinda liked it (Can't criteria since im also 'fresh blood', lol)
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04-03-2008, 02:11 AM
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Very decent first sig, the only thing is probably that bright red colour yakbabbler name, better color?
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04-03-2008, 03:36 AM
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Quote:
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Not bad, but you're not ready yet for pictures like this:
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04-03-2008, 03:38 AM
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Quote:
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Very decent first sig, the only thing is probably that bright red colour yakbabbler name, better color?
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i really didnt know what kind of color to pick, suggestion? |
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04-03-2008, 04:26 AM
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An anvil.
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Nope. It's a capital "I".
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04-03-2008, 04:35 AM
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ok I made some changes to it, its in the original post, and you can see a comparison
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04-03-2008, 04:40 AM
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Liked the background and I think the white font is better.
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04-03-2008, 04:52 AM
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not bad for a first work on some tuts an blending an youll be an ace sig maker in no time
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04-03-2008, 12:02 PM
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really good for a first time =o
nice use of c4d's & nice blending
the text should fit the color sheme of the sig..
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04-04-2008, 03:25 AM
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04-13-2008, 09:51 AM
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Nope. It's a capital "I".
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WTF, I call BS on this. |
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04-13-2008, 12:09 PM
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i think u should change the border. its jusy the contrast between the light blues and the one black border is a bit off putting (it is blue isnt it ? -im colour blind)
maybe try a fancier border, double lined maybe or faded?
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