First Graphics Attempt! Please Rate and Comment!

**Poparteeb** · 04-10-2008, 06:22 PM

Hey, I was trying to regain my skillz at photoshop, so tell me how this looks and comment and suggest to me how I can improve! Arigato gozaimasu!

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**Naga** · 04-10-2008, 08:05 PM

render doesn't blend that much with the background. the picture is blurry and in low quality. The background doesn't match the theme really...

**Silverstone** · 04-10-2008, 08:14 PM

You should render the car a bit. Make it look a little... cartoony.
Kinda like what was done in this pic. Hint: Try the "Brushstrokes" filters.

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**Poparteeb** · 04-10-2008, 08:43 PM

Hmm. yeah, I used a picture and tried to render it, then I used brushstrokes where I copied the Rin layer and used diff. styles on that however it ended up giving her that blurry effect. The car, I used a crosshatching brush and that was my attempt.....

**Silverstone** · 04-10-2008, 08:50 PM

Try using the Accented Lines filter. Play around with that and maybe fade the color a bit.

**Benawolnow** · 04-11-2008, 12:51 AM

Little blury and the background didn't go that well and as for the second picture I have no clue what to say o.o...

**Slayer_07** · 04-11-2008, 01:16 AM

wow....uber skillz......*stares in awe*...at least compared to my own..

**Silverstone** · 04-11-2008, 01:32 AM

The second pic just confuses the hell out of me.
In my opinion, it's just too "busy" and/or "loud".

**Poparteeb** · 04-11-2008, 01:36 AM

hmm. I agree, tho when i print it out its kinda cool cuz its loud ^^. but now *back to tuning up skillz. thanks for the sugg!

btw. where do you find c4ds?

oh and the guy is from berserk.

**Benawolnow** · 04-11-2008, 03:31 AM

The second picture *also* seems a little blured and pixelated somewhat and all those colors mixing I don't have a clue what you are trying to acomplish unless the picture was like that already o.o

**Jakku** · 04-11-2008, 02:18 PM

www.planetrenders.net

You'll find plenty of C4d's there

Or you can download them, but i recommend just saving them from planetrenders..

**Ya-chan** · 04-11-2008, 03:19 PM

Blurry as hell :p but your better than me xD