a sig i made

**Deilos** · 12-01-2009, 04:06 AM

comments and constructive criticism pls
and my current sig

**<GO~>** · 12-01-2009, 10:53 AM

Lol 10 views and no one is commenting?

I like it GJ, the background looks good but i find it a little distracting.

The render looks like it was roughly cut out and pasted on the background with a few lighting effects done.

The text isn't what i'd say is great and is hard to read.

overall, Great Job! Keep Going!

**teazle** · 12-01-2009, 01:23 PM

1st:
I dont reali know what to say about it.
But I'd like to see more deapth.
The text is bad, why do you have the text in two diffrent (almost opposite) places?
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Current:
I dont like grundge signatures that much.
However I think the face of the girl is too bright, its difficult to separate it from the background.
text is better in this one imo, but the its placed too far from focal.

**metal-blaze** · 12-01-2009, 02:12 PM

I Really like it nice work the only thing that i think needs chaging is your text placement it's too far from your focal point, really do like it tho

**FEARON** · 12-01-2009, 09:27 PM

i feel as if there is 3 focals :O but i like it

**FIGHT5** · 12-01-2009, 10:56 PM

Very nice. Good job.

**Odsium** · 12-01-2009, 11:22 PM

I find it sort of bright. It also looks oversharpened.
Hmm... I find I see some green in the background(or is it just me?). Don't like that.

**cookiemonster** · 12-01-2009, 11:24 PM

bad textplacement. too much light and too much focals as FEARON mentioned. the pink on her sleeves is distracting. and why is a random black spot on the left side? the blur on the front is odd...weelll its good at first then it feels like it doesnt fit. Also, the center there are too much yellow soft brush.
overall, not a bad sig. and i like ur borders.

**Euphie** · 12-02-2009, 12:50 AM

They look pretty good.

Though I would definitely mirror what you did with the renders/brushes on the right side to the left side because its too bright, but I like how it looks on the right side.

What program are you using, and are you using contrast/brightness adjustments and sharpening masks?

I don't know about gimp, but its probably just like CS1 - CS3, (cs4 has great contrast/brightness) where contrast/saturation makes it look sharper/brighter but lower quality... sorry if you don't use these, it just looks like it.

If not, I would suggest using higher quality stock...

**Deilos** · 12-02-2009, 03:32 AM

better or worse?

i use CS4 btw

**Euphie** · 12-02-2009, 05:30 AM

I like the sides on the top one better, but the middle of the bottom one better

**<GO~>** · 12-02-2009, 06:28 AM

The top one's stock image is too sharp for the eye to focus, also try to make the stock stand out a little more so our eyes focus on it, not the background.