The one for today.

**teazle** · 12-01-2009, 02:22 PM

Guess Ima gonna try to make a sig everyday

From now on.
Iso CnC, Dno the name of the char =)
Too plain?

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**Odsium** · 12-01-2009, 09:29 PM

Name of the character is Haseo from .hack//Roots, .hack//GU, and .hack//GU+, btw.
Work on blending and colors. The lightsource is okay, but if the light source is yellow, shouldn't the yellow be reflected on his armor and face? That's what I think, at least.
I don't like the empty space on the left side.

**Kaboose** · 12-01-2009, 10:23 PM

good luck making a sig every day, i tried that once. failed

**teazle** · 12-01-2009, 10:35 PM

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Originally Posted by Odsium

Name of the character is Haseo from .hack//Roots, .hack//GU, and .hack//GU+, btw.
Work on blending and colors. The lightsource is okay, but if the light source is yellow, shouldn't the yellow be reflected on his armor and face? That's what I think, at least.
I don't like the empty space on the left side.

There are some yellow on his armor.. But I guess I did'nt reali thought of that

Thanx for cnc though <3

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Originally Posted by Kaboose

good luck making a sig every day, i tried that once. failed

Lol.. Guess ima gonna fail eventually.
Though heres the one for today

Elbow was cut, Ima gonna fix that later

**Odsium** · 12-01-2009, 10:44 PM

You could try smudge the edges of the render. It helps with the elbow and blends it in somewhat.
The new one you made, I don't really like the thing at the elbow, but you're probably gonna fix that later, so whatever. The text in this one is really distracting IMO, you should tone down the opacity or set it on overlay or something. The c4d at the left is ruining the flow.

**Euphie** · 12-02-2009, 12:28 AM

The left side is pretty much blank... you need something there.

**teazle** · 12-02-2009, 02:25 AM

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Originally Posted by Odsium

You could try smudge the edges of the render. It helps with the elbow and blends it in somewhat.
The new one you made, I don't really like the thing at the elbow, but you're probably gonna fix that later, so whatever. The text in this one is really distracting IMO, you should tone down the opacity or set it on overlay or something. The c4d at the left is ruining the flow.

Smudge is not part of the style

Therefor I will not smudge it.
However I am gonna fix it later by painting the elbow myself.

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Originally Posted by Euphie

The left side is pretty much blank... you need something there.

Well the black is a c4d

I was trying to make it look like that c4d is closest to the viewer (depth kinda way), because the light comes from a deeper place in the pic, that c4d has to be dark cuz there is no light shining on it.. If u know what I mean.
My vocabulary is reali bad

**Deilos** · 12-02-2009, 02:50 AM

it feels like you cut the left side out though

**Omo-Chan** · 12-02-2009, 02:53 AM

Ok nice work here but you shouldnt contrast colors that much, also try to match art styles and textures. like if it has a hand drawn look dont use a metallic game looking BG. because as it is right now, to me anyway, it just looks like some C4D's with a render slapped in the middle. keep working on it man.

**Euphie** · 12-02-2009, 05:24 AM

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Originally Posted by teazle

Well the black is a c4d

I was trying to make it look like that c4d is closest to the viewer (depth kinda way), because the light comes from a deeper place in the pic, that c4d has to be dark cuz there is no light shining on it.. If u know what I mean.
My vocabulary is reali bad

I see what you mean. But its still just...blank. Space. As a suggestion, you could put more c4d there, scale it down to make it look further away, and still keep it dark. It just needs substance.