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Re: Naruto Predestiny: Before
Old 01-08-2008, 07:10 PM   #46 (permalink)
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Jakku stepped back in a harmonious manner, and bowed. "Its a great honour to meet you, and in fact to serve with you, in time to come" Jakku addressed to Hyuuga and Uchiha. After a short while, the subject of Jakku's parent's came into the conservation. "So i hear your mother was a Shinobi of a Sand Village, am i correct?" asked Hyuuga politely, " Yes she was, she was a great shinobi, and also a great mother, sadly though she's not with us anymore (Implying that she's dead)" Jakku replied. Hyuuga's faced mourned for him, then added "Being Half Origin of the Sand Village, am i right in saying that this Mission will be an important one for you?", Jakku answered wholesomely "Yes, It will be, not only is it a personal matter, but it'll be a challenge, a mission i will enjoy". Hyuuga smiled and backed down with the questions.

Jakku embraced his feelings and stared out the window, within himself proclaiming " I will find him... mother.. i will avenge you.."
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Re: Naruto Predestiny: Before
Old 01-08-2008, 08:35 PM   #47 (permalink)
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Arturia stopped off and observed Suzumiya with an intent expression. A unkempt man he was, but he radiated calm power and intensity. She liked him well enough, he wasn't like some of the other jounin who were loud and brash. "Konichiwa Suzumiya." She looked away, he seemed to be looking to intently. Masking her blush with a ice cold stare, she gestured to his students and said,

"Aren't you supposed to be there?"

He continued his scrutiny and so Arturia walked on. I might treat him to ramen one day, she thought. However as she walked on, she had the feeling he was looking at her in an inappropriate way. Maybe my dress is cut too short today, she thought ruefully. As she felt him turn around, she implanted one of her patented stinkbombs on one of his unsuspecting students. Holding the detonator in her hand, she smiled and walked on.

Bring her mind to bear on the matter ahead, she walked, deeper and deeper into the forbidding forest. Crows and blackbirds crackled above and focusing her mind, she allowed herself, or rather her mind to expand completely. Vaguely she felt the Fourth talking to someone full of anger and desire, she had no desire to meet who was this again Ah yes, the Uchiha and the Hyuuga clan leaders, who was talking to some poor angry fellow. Expanding her telepathic connections she recalled him to be Jakku. But that was of no importance right now.

Suddenly there was a crackle underfoot and she whirled around leaping clear of the explosion at the same time. Drawing her 6 foot long 1/2 foot wide long sword, wrapped in bandages almost horizontally placed along her back she focused her chakra and let loose a slash that demolished 8 trees. Sheathing it, Arturia always tried to use it as little as possible since people fainted at the sight of her sword, she leapt onto a tree and surveyed it.

A man lay dead, wearing a headband that had a wolf's crest. Slinging him over her shoulder, she walked back to the village.
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Re: Naruto Predestiny: Before
Old 01-08-2008, 08:58 PM   #48 (permalink)
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The stink bomb Arturia planted on Hiro, The youngest student of Suzumiya activated, Causing the whole forest to stink like an old shoe. Suzumiya cancelled the training for today. As he was walking towards the village, In the east direction, He heard very loud noises. "What was that?" Said Yagami with a bit nervousness in his voice. He started running west. He stopped, Noticing a lot of demolished trees. He walked towards the bushes nearby and spotted blood stains. He nodded to himself and realized the blood can be Arturia's. Since the Jounin always thought about her as a nakama he respected a lot, He knew what he got to do now. He started walking east, Back to the village...

Suzumiya walked down the corridor, Arriving at the door to the Fourth's office. He walked in. "Hokage-sama, did you see Artu..." Yagami stopped talking suddenly, Noticing a lot of ninjas in the office. He actually recognized two of them: AMBU member, Jakku-kun, A very well trained Jounin and Asakura Misuzu-san, One of the best Jounins and teachers in the village. He lowered his head. "Gomen." Was the only thing he said.
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Old 01-08-2008, 09:31 PM   #49 (permalink)
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((..........That's close enough. Just make sure the technique your particular family itself uses is different than all others. Example, the Hyuuga's Byakugan is something on Hyuuga can use. You can continue roleplaying now.))
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Old 01-08-2008, 09:51 PM   #50 (permalink)
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Uchiha turned to the intruder, his kunai ready, but he let it slip back into his sleeve as he saw who appeared. "Oh...It's you..." He had a hard time remembering people's names sometimes if he hadn't seen them enough.

Seifer also turned, his arms cross in front of his chest. "Six of us, some jounin and some chuunin....Sounds big."

The Fourth nodded. "Walk with me." He lead them to the rooftop.

"This world is a cruel one for us shinobi...It seems a demon has come. He is the worst of all, the Kyuubi, the nine-tailed fox himself! He is currently attacking the Sands, and they are having no luck fighting back with Shikaku... They have requested our aid, and I have sent a message saying I will send my best. Hatake Kakashi and Jiraiya, two of my best students, have already gone, to fight ahead of us..."

He turned back to the group and stood completely still as his wife came up to him, holding his arm. She was a beautiful woman, with tender brown hair and bright, loving blue eyes. The Fourth took a deep breath. "Long have the Sands been our enemies, but now they are our allies! Jakku, Hyuuga, Uchiha, Asakura Misuzu, Okai Seifer, and whoever I forgot your name...I task you with the mission of holding back the Kyuubi until myself and Sarutobi-kun, the prior Third, reach you all in the Village of Sand. Do you accept!?!?"

Seifer held his right arm up, pinning it horizontally to his chest, with his right hand over his heart. "Hai, Hokage-dono!"
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Re: Naruto Predestiny: Before
Old 01-08-2008, 10:08 PM   #51 (permalink)
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((Was Jakku, part of the 6?))
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Re: Naruto Predestiny: Before
Old 01-08-2008, 10:39 PM   #52 (permalink)
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Being overwhelmed with the occured situation, Suzumiya walked with the remaining ninjas to the rooftop, Being led by the Fourth Hokage. He already forgot about Arturia...

Yagami looked at the Fourth. He was thinking. Thinking very hard. The last mission he attended was 5 years ago... It was that one when Kenta died. The Jounin was struggling with himself, With his feelings... He was scared. Scared of losing another nakama because of his mistakes. Yet, He could not say "no".

"Ha-Hai..." Suzumiya said with much hesitancy in his voice. The memories came back... The painful ones... Ah, Kenta...
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Old 01-09-2008, 12:05 AM   #53 (permalink)
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((Yeah, he was, I'll edit that.))

The Fourth looked at the others quietly, awaiting their response. "I will not force you to go..."

Seifer turned around and walked away, staring up at the Hokage Rock Faces. He held his hand out to them and smiled. He felt like he could grab one of the heads and pluck it off....But whatever, his mind was set. He turned back around and walked over to the group, standing by Misuzu.
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Old 01-09-2008, 12:16 AM   #54 (permalink)
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Misuzu bowed slightly. "I'll go, Hokage-dono" she said quietly. She turned to smile at Seifer. "I guess I'm not going to Iwa afterall"
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Old 01-09-2008, 12:34 AM   #55 (permalink)
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Seifer smirked. "Well, think of it this way. You don't have to go to a smelly old town of gold miners, you get to go on a mission with handsome me, I get to go on a mission with beautiful you, and..." He stopped at the last part, then nodded and opened his mouth again, "...And I get to have the chance to protect you, Misuzu-chan."
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Old 01-09-2008, 12:49 AM   #56 (permalink)
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Walking along the road, Arturia stopped short at the assembly coming out. The dead man was still slung over her shoulder but she recognized the Fourth and his beautiful wife. She thought she also saw Seifer. Apparently quite snug about something and flirting again with Misuzu. That lady was quite attractive actually. So long as no one flirted with her, she'd have that would be flirter's head on a platter before he could say please. Now about Suzumiya... he seemed a bit unsettled. Well that was worrying. She got there in 2 seconds with her flash steps. She pretended not to notice some of the younger Chuunin's stares at her body.

"Hokage-dono, I found this intruder in our borders. Unfortunately he's dead."

Arturia sprang the catch on the wolf's head headband, and gasped.

It had the hidden Sand's crest. Why would that be hidden? Not knowing the full circumstances it was expected.

"The Sand has attacked us."
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Old 01-09-2008, 01:03 AM   #57 (permalink)
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The Fourth burst out laughing. "Actually, that's just a dumby." He pointed at the, now obvious in the sunlight, fact that the thing was just a kawarimi. "I really wish you would just stop assuming things."

The real Sand shinobi walked up behind them. "Fourth Hokage, Kazekage-sama wishes for your reply...The...It...The Kyuubi has reached the village!!!!"
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Old 01-09-2008, 01:13 AM   #58 (permalink)
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Misuzu opened her mouth to say something to Seifer, but in the sudden appearance of the Sand nin, she said nothing. Without thinking Misuzu rushed toward the village gates.
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Old 01-09-2008, 01:14 AM   #59 (permalink)
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"Explain the explosion and attempted strike against my back Hokage dono."

Arturia grimaced, it was unpleasant to have been attacked from behind and even worse to find it was a dummy. But just but....

She looked closer, the body had been mangled so badly from her attack that she could hardly make out the features. But even though it was a dummy....

She let out her breath in amazement. The would-be assassin had used a real life person as a replacement. THe blood and organs weren't fake, only the person she thought it was was simply not the one lying on the ground right now. But it was a real person.
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Old 01-09-2008, 01:22 AM   #60 (permalink)
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((Ummm, could you please stop with the conspiracy theory, Popart?))

Seifer turned and, drawn to what felt to him to be distress, chased after her. "Misuzu-chan! What's wrong?!"
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