Naruto: The Revamping

**Avankiri** · 07-27-2008, 05:48 PM

The story of Naruto never truly existed. It was a legend made up so that young ninja would grow up and try to be as strong and brave as they could be...The Uchiha clan was never annihilated. The Fourth Hokage actually succeeded in condensing the Kyuubi's form into that of a dense crystal. He then threw the crystal into a flaming volcano, hoping the evil demon would be forever destroyed. We know not if it was successful.

Welcome to the world that the mythical shinobi named Naruto lived in. Choose your country. Choose your village. Choose who you are, and how you interact with the world. For in all things, the choice is yours.

You must start as an academy student on the verge of graduation, but you can have an extra character with another rank, if you wish.
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Team 3:
Leader: Hitsugaya Akira
Members: Mikan Azumi, Lawrence Blansui, Avalon Richter

Team 5:
Leader: N/A
Members: Rika Kamimaru, Ichigo Daidoujii, Shinji Tosaka

Team 7:
Leader: Yukari Sekai
Members:Kagaku Dainou, Rippuku Ikari, Kosuka Himonu
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Name: Richter {Reek-ter. It's Romanian} Avalon

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Village: Konoha

Specialty Jitsu (Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, and Genjutsu): A balance of the three

Special Jutsu(The jutsu element you specialize in. Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, or Lightning): Lightning

Secret Jutsu (If you have one): The Avalon family's Blood Limit jutsu, Raijin no Jutsu {Thunder God Technique}

Secret Jutsu's power: Summons up the chakra of oneself and the things in nature, and unleashes it in the form of a blade of pure, raw chakra. Like Chidori, except that it doesn't go away with one strike. And it's louder, hence the name 'Thunder God'. The sound can burst the eardrums of enemies, causing them to go permanently deaf. The lightning element in it can slice through bone like a hot knife through butter.

Rank: Academy student

Personality: Born into a clan that branched off from the Hyuuga and Uchiha clans, he has an almost 'Sasuke-like' nature, cool and calm in all situations. However, Richter, unlike most members of his family, tends to see the good in all people. This earns him many friends when it comes to girls, but guys tend to dislike him because he has an attitude around them that says 'I can kick your ass and you won't even know it.'

Bio: Richter was born to the Avalon clan, a group of shinobi who took teachings of inner peace from the Hyuuga, and protection of others from the Uchiha, and combined it into a word that simply means, to the clan, 'Shield of Peace'. Thus, the family symbol is a kite-shield with an olive branch on it. However, that didn't stop the family from becoming one of the three most powerful clans in the village. The Fourth Hokage himself was a member of the clan before he died.

Richter's childhood was one of distraught. He seemed to bare the same fate as that of Sasuke of the mythical Uchiha clan, not the real one. His entire family was murdered in a single night, and he was too weak to defend himself. His only goal in life? To avenge the murder of his clan. To do so, he has shut himself off emotionally from all others, earning him a fairly decent reputation as the 'cool kid' in town.

Richter has practically perfected the family jutsu, and intends to use it one day to avenge those deaths. Until then, cracking his hardened heart is gonna be a hell of a task. But think about it this way. Getting him in your team also makes you a cool person.

**AutumnAvarice** · 07-30-2008, 10:07 AM

Name: Mikan Azumi

Age: 13

Gender: Female

Village: Suna

Specialty Jutsu (Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, and Genjutsu): Genjutsu and Taijutsu

Special Jutsu(The jutsu element you specialize in. Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, or Lightning): Wind

Secret Jutsu (If you have one): Fujin no Jutsu

Secret Jutsu's power: Summons a large tornado that destroys everything and everyone in it's path. Inside the tornado are wind blades. These crescent shaped gusts of wind and shred anyone to pieces. This jutsu shortens Mikan's lifespan everytime she uses it. She has only used it once.

Rank: Academy student

Personality: Mikan is an extremely cute, energetic, and a good-natured girl, but her clumsiness leads her to trouble most of the time. She has a strong willpower and a happy-go-lucky attitude. Although she is sweet, she can be scary when angry and tempted.

Bio: Mikan was born in the Azumi clan, a clan full of wind users. The members of the clan usually pick a special weapon and generate their chakra through it to create special wind attacks. For example: Mikan's special weapon is a fan. She mainly uses it to make wind blades. The family symbol is a pinwheel with a mandarin orange in front of it.

Mikan's childhood was a happy one. Her parents were alive and made sure to teach her about the important things in life like love and friendship.

**Blackhauck** · 07-30-2008, 10:29 PM

Name: Lawrence Blansui

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Village: Konoha

Specialty Jutsu (Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, and Genjutsu): Ninjutsu

Special Jutsu(The jutsu element you specialize in. Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, or Lightning): Fire

Secret Jutsu (If you have one):Katon no Justu

Secret Jutsu's power: When his charka is extremely low and is sad his chakra will be 5x greater and will be engulfed in flames. He can shoot the fire at people and is deadly accurate. This only lasts for 10 minutes. When the time runs out Lawrence passes out and he can't summon his chakra for 3 days.

Rank: Academy student

Personality: Lawrence is a nice kid. He is cocky and thinks he is unstoppable since he found out about this secret jutsu. He is pretty strong but his cockyness is his only weakness. He is smart and agile and gets the job done pretty quickly.

Bio: Lawrence was in a powerful clan of Fire users.... before the clan was annilated. He escaped when the clan was attacked and lived in Konoha ever since. He put on a tough guy attack so he can hide the fact that he is still greiving over his clan's demise.

Lawrence found out about his secret jutsu when his clan was being attacked. When his clan was being attacked he was sad and his charka was extremely low then fire engulfed him. He woke up later by Konoha and stayed there.

**Balox08** · 07-31-2008, 07:16 AM

Name: Kosuka Himonu

Age: 12

Gender: Male

Village: Village Hidden in Mist(Land of Water)

Specialty Jutsu (Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, and Genjutsu): Ninjutsu, Taijutsu

Special Jutsu(The jutsu element you specialize in. Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, or Lightning): Water

Secret Jutsu (If you have one): Kirigakure no Jutsu

Secret Jutsu power: Kirigakure no Jutsu creates a thick fog thats impossible to see through(except by the user) that blinds a confuses the enemy.

Rank: Academy student

Personality: Kosuka is antisocial and doesnt make very many friends and in his point of view doesnt need them. He hates to be looked down upon because of his age. He likes to take time and observe people and study them finding any opening that he can, then...strikes.

Bio: Kosuka was adopted by a Clan of trained killers, called the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist. Although not one of the seven he still acted like one silent and deadly he has been a cold blooded killer since he was 6 years old . He always tried to follow in Zabuza Momochi footsteps Zabuza was like a father figure to him, he taught him how to fight, kill, and survive.
But one day when Kosuka woke up everyone was gone with a note from Zabuza saying
"Dont follow us you need to learn how to live on your own become stronger and then find us and take a spot in the Seven Swordsman of the Mist" thus his wanderings brought him to Konoha.

Kosuka learned his Special Jutsu from his mentor Zabuza and carries around a giant longsword.

**Avankiri** · 07-31-2008, 05:10 PM

Richter sat at his desk as usual. It was the same routine he'd practiced day after day. Grumbling, he yawned and sat back, his pencil and notes ready. Richter watched as Kirino-sensei walked in and smiled at her class. "Good morning everyone. I'll wait a bit so everyone else has a chance to get in."

**AutumnAvarice** · 08-01-2008, 07:53 AM

Mikan walked nervously through the empty hallways of Konoha's Academy. She took a note out of her pocket and reread it for the tenth time. It was a note explaining that she was a new transfer student as well as directions to her class. She quickly found her classroom and stared at the door. She gathered her courage and took a deep breath.

Mikan cautiously entered the her classroom and blushed shyly as most of the attention was on her now. She focused her gaze firmly on the teacher and avoided the curious looks from the students. "I'm the new transfer student" she said timidly as she handed the note to the Kirino-sensei.

**6pathsofpain** · 08-01-2008, 02:10 PM

Name:Kagaku Dainou

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Village: Konoha

Specialty Jutsu:Unknown

Special Jutsu:Unknown

Secret Jutsu :Unknown

Secret Jutsu's power:Unknown

Rank: Academy student

Personality: Remarkably bright and inquisitive, Kagaku is a person who belives in the phrase "Knowledge is Power". But he is not so obsessed with knowledge that his Shinobi skills are at the Sakura level. He is mostly quiet and tends to keep to himself, but the people who know him see him as a kind and fun person.

Bio:Born from the newly joined Dainou clan, Kagaku comes from a long line of Shinobi Scientists. His ancestors are responsible for creating thing such as the Hyorogan (Soldier Pill) and Chakra Armor. The Dainou Clan joined Konoha in order to avoid the many unsavory people they had dealt with in the past, and Kagaku is the youngest member.

Coming from a clan of scientists, Kagaku is very intelligent. He has the knowledge to create things from poisons to antidotes to chakra-boosting chemicals and sense-altering drugs. He is a very talented shinobi, but prefers to use his inventions to fight instead of his jutsu. Which is why no one knows just what jutsu he uses.

Though the youngest of his clan, he is considered the best and is challenged only by his sisters. His greatest skill is his knack for inventing Chakra-based weaponry.

**6pathsofpain** · 08-01-2008, 02:26 PM

Kagaku slowly walked into the classroom "Sorry I'm late sensei" he said walking to his seat.

As soon as he sat down he pulled a pair of goggles out of his pocket And put them over his eyes. He usually wore glasses but he recently got contacts. Still, it didn't feel right so he wore goggles over his eyes.He fished a small black machine out of his pocket and plugged a cable from it into a port on the side of his goggles. He brought the machine up to his mouth and said

"Aura Vision, on"

The goggles lenses began to glow and he locked around. He looked at Richter and the aura around him

"A swirling bright green" he thought "He must be pretty calm"

He looked over at the new student "Orange with a few flecks of pink""And it spreads out" he thought "She has a lot of energy to say the least"

He looked to the teacher "Dark Blue" he thought "Patience and Kindness"

He pulled his goggles up to his forehead and pulled out a sketchbook. He flipped through the pages until he reached the design blueprint for his latest invention. A new chakra weapon.

"This is going to be great" he thought

**Blackhauck** · 08-01-2008, 08:20 PM

Lawrence wasn't paying any attention to what was going on. He was acting cocky like normal and thinks he is the best at everything so he doesn't have to pay attention in school. He was just looking around like normal. He looked over and saw someone with goggles.
"Hey what are those goggles for?"

**6pathsofpain** · 08-01-2008, 08:54 PM

Kagaku looked over at Lawrence and took the time to examine his aura.

"Bright red with white streaks" he thought "Strength with a touch of.....arrogance"

He pulled his goggles down to his neck and answered

"I use them for a lot of things""Right now I have them set to read the aura's that naturally radiate from people""By reading a persons' aura I can get a good look at their feelings or personality"

**Blackhauck** · 08-01-2008, 11:26 PM

Lawrence started to laugh when he heard the response. "Right thats really cool and all but...... now how will that help you in battle?"

**6pathsofpain** · 08-01-2008, 11:56 PM

"It doesn't" Kagaku said "But it has other settings"

He brought the machine that was plugged into his goggles up to his mouth again "Chakra Scanner, on" he said

The goggles lenses began to glow and numbers flashed before his eyes "This feature gives a chakra measurement of whoever I look at"

He looked at Lawrence and a number appeared "It looks like your chakra level is 810" he said "That's odd, most Genin have Chakra levels of 1200 or over"

**Blackhauck** · 08-02-2008, 04:35 AM

"I have a high amount of charka. That thing must be broken...... But whatever. To me if it doesn't help you in battle its useless."

**6pathsofpain** · 08-02-2008, 02:54 PM

Kagaku frowned "Useless?" he thought

Kagaku took great pride in his inventions, so insulting them would be worse than insulting him.

"I'm sure it's not broken" he said "Maybe I should reset it"

He pressed a button on the machine and the word "RESET" appeared on the lenses.

As numbers flashed he looked around at his classmates. He stopped at Richter and scanned him

"Richter's chakra level is 1540" he thought

He looked at Mikan "Her chakra level is an even 1300" he thought

He scanned all his classmates and they all had chakra levels of 1200 or more. He went back to Lawrence and his chakra level was the same, 810.

"I reset my scanner" Kagaku said "But it says the exact same thing, 810""You have the lowest chakra level out of the entire class"

**Blackhauck** · 08-02-2008, 06:01 PM

"I still say that thing is broken but whatever. I know I have a high amount of chakra." Lawrence looked away for a minute and started to think back at the day he first used his secret jutsu. "Did that lower my chakra level?" he muddered.